August 23rd, 2008

V 4658

Several people, here and otherwise, felt that they did not get into the story until Victoria set off to speak to the magician. So, I'm experimenting with starting the book at that point...though, of course, this postpones the first dialogue to page 6. Not sure that's a good idea.

Anyway, I'd love to hear what y'all think!

(I should add that this version goes about 9 pages farther than the other one did.)

 

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